Amazing Artisan

Another poem. For my girlfriend. What do you think?
My girlfriend, an Fine Arts major, was feeling discouraged and afraid about how she’s going to shape her career, and her future in general. i made this for her. to encourage. to uplift. to adamant.
What do you think? could you give me your opinion and share all your thoughts? thank you.
For You, My Artist
Because your smile makes
The sun bright,
Smile for me.
Smile for you.
So that you may see
The dusk
And the dawn.
The sun rises
With you
As does the moon
Fall in fright.
Take hold these reins,
Grasp firm
And tight.
Pull steady stead
Unto your
Course desired.
The world is
At your will.
Contort it
As you please.
Oh astounding
Artisan,
Fear not the
Night.
Fear not the
Dark.
For prevalence
Is inevitable
Simply because
You are
Amazing.
I think you should improve this one
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